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Polar Bear Cup 🐻‍❄️ Unofficial Kirari Award [Tanka] Shi

I am terribly sorry for being so late💦

I will now announce the continuation of the Kirari Awards for the Tanka category🎵

Since I want to honor so many people,
I have combined the certificates into one instead of giving them to each person individually.
I am aiming to keep going without pushing myself too hard (o*。_。)o bow

Also, please forgive me if my interpretation of your comments is wrong💦 👈 I'm a bit of a weakling, so this is my insurance

( `・∀・´)ノ Please treat me well💖

Congratulations on winning the Mother Kirari Award💖

Here is the certificate I would like to send to everyone (*'ω'*)
I made it in postcard size👍
Please feel free to take it home (*- -)(*_ _) bow

The number of entries in the Tanka category exceeded the previous one.
To both the newcomers and the regulars,
thank you for participating💖

Thank you, rira-san, for creating the list💖


98.Mother's voice saying we are together, she is by my side
   On the way home from shopping, clutching my scarf

The voices of people in our memories are always warm,
and I feel they warm our hearts and give us courage (^^♪
Thank you for your gentle poem (*- -)(*_ _) bow

From Mom


96.The night sky on a snowy day is clear and beautiful
   As far as the quiet apartment complex trash area

All three poems had an image where the world quietly expands from the words.
In particular, the contrast between 'clear and beautiful' and 'as far as the trash area' in this poem was impressive and captured my heart.

From Mom


94.Now I, with my naked heart trembling
   Convey my feelings to you, my beloved

A poem that makes even me, the reader, feel a flutter.
It takes courage to convey your feelings, and it makes your heart tremble, doesn't it (^^♪
Even with my 'Mom brain,' it made my heart skip a beat💕 ( *´艸`)

From Mom


92.Two stars shining beyond the winter trees
   I felt they were my parents and I cried

All three poems were tearful poems filled with deep emotion.
Crying doesn't change anything, but by crying, your heart can settle or be released.
Please cry when you want to cry 😢

From Mom


89. White breath, pretending it's smoke, back in the day
   Becoming Holmes with a candy pipe

I was glued to these heartwarming tanka.
The nostalgia and the poems that make you smile involuntarily are wonderful ( *´艸`)
Hehe, I could picture the adorable scene and it made me smile ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ

From Mom


85. The pork bun you said you wanted to eat
   Run while holding it, amidst the dancing snow

Out of the three poems about love, the scene in this one is so cute and heartwarming.
While thinking, 'Don't slip and fall!',
I felt like I wanted to wait for him to come running with a smile ( *´艸`)

From Mom


82. Migratory birds ride the winter wind and arrive
   From the icy lands far, far away

You beautifully composed three different scenes, it was masterful.
Among them, this poem conveys such a grand image,
it made me want to look up at the winter sky (^^♪

From Mom


79. What I captured is a once-in-a-lifetime snowflake
   Knowing full well it will vanish so easily

So it's Naeko-san who writes such poignant poems... (^^♪ I see!
I'm enchanted by the beauty of the words, and the scenes come to mind like a movie.
You are skilled not only at tanka and haiku, but also at novels, songs, and creating images, and your cute essays are wonderful and charming 💖 I'm falling for your thoughtful comments too (≧▽≦)

A love letter from Mom


78. When I hear it, I feel deeply that you've returned
   'Fire Prevention' in the hometown sky

This is a wonderful poem that evokes nostalgia (^^♪
I remember once when I was little, I insisted on joining the fire patrol.
Clacking the wooden clappers together made my hands tingle, it was so much fun.

From Mom


76.The first sunrise, my rusted self and the sun
   Were certainly there, certainly existed

There are such distinct characteristics in how the words are chosen and arranged, and the imagery that comes to mind is so unique and skillful. Oh, Mitei-san. I see ( *´艸`)
Hehe, it's nice how 'certainly' appears twice👍

From Okan


74.Finding my bias dancing, oh candy
   We jumped together on Christmas Eve


72.
Playing Christmas, joining hands with AI
   Surpass the record, surpass yourself

I knew immediately whose poem 74 was. Hehe ( *´艸`)
The lower seven-seven of 72 is nice❣
'Surpass the record, surpass yourself' is powerful and coolヾ(*´∀`*)ノ

From Okan


69.After the car skidded on the snow
   I caused a rear-end collision and my liver went cold

Since I grew up in snow country, I thought 'I get it' for all three poems.
And poem 69 even made my heart race💦💦
I've also messed up on a winter highway before💦 My liver went cold ( ;∀;)

From Okan


68.Looking down at the overgrown garden, saying sorry
   What's this, what's that, a Christmas rose

Is the supple core of strength and brightness I feel from these three poems a reflection of your personality?
Reading them, my heart warmed up before I knew it, and they were poems that cheered me up.
Thank you for sharing such wonderful works❣

From Okan


65.Grabbing my coat on thin ice, matching our steps
   I think I like the crowds where we snuggle up close

I couldn't help but smile at such an adorable scene💖
Okan had times like that too, probably, surely, without a doubt❣
I have a habit of walking half a step behind his left side, but in winter, I like having him next to me because it's warm ( *´艸`)

From Okan


62.The voices of my children at home far away on the night road I walk
   I hear them faintly and now I start to run

Wow, it's like the opening scene of a movie.
Your lovely children are waiting for you in a warm home.
Thinking of that makes me feel so affectionate and want to see them💖

From Mom


61.Even though it hurts enough to make my heart stop
   I can't do anything against static electricity

I read this while nodding, saying, "Yeah, yeah, that's right."
My whole family are static electricity holders (what a way to put it!), so we often get zapped and it hurts😢 The expression is cute and nice👍

From Mom


58.Get well, get well
   Get well, get well, get well

A poem that feels like wordplay,
and also like a gentle encouragement.
It's very Hayashippu-chan-like👍

From Mom


56.For some reason, I suddenly lean in for a lap pillow
   My heart leaps as my hair is stroked

Ebi-chan, a presence that just makes me happy that you're alive.
Mom was about to melt at how cute this tanka is (≧▽≦)
Ebi-chan, I'm always watching over you (I'm not a stalker, really🤣)

From Mom


52.Person who doesn't come, become a person who comes~ Bibbidi-Bobbidi-Boo
   Merry Christmas

All three poems were wonderful, and this one in particular was so cute that it captured my heart.
Yeah, yeah, I want the person who doesn't come to become someone who does.
The magic words were perfect for that painful feeling of wanting to see someone ( *´艸`)

From Mom


51. A cat comes and asks to get into the kotatsu, there is nothing that can defeat those sparkling
   eyes of theirs

If you are looked at by a cat's sparkling eyes,
the correct answer is to welcome them into the kotatsu❣
It's truly adorable, and their carefree nature is lovely ( *´艸`)

The photo book "Cats are Liquid" was wonderful. From Mom


46. Pierced ears that I had no connection to
   Since they were gifted, I'll brace myself for winter

Among the three poems that make my heart flutter, this one really draws me in.
The fact that you don't say "Why didn't you buy me earrings!" is so you, Kuuya-san. It's lovely and heartwarming ( *´艸`)

From Mom


45. One meat bun at the convenience store for 110 yen
   Tragedy! Full cash back

A, a genius has appeared❣
I've never seen such a hilarious tanka (≧▽≦)
If I was going to get cash back, I should have bought something more expensive _| ̄|○、、、(≧▽≦)

From Mom


43. There is a country robbed of its warmth, and I weep
   Oh innocent children, oh children of the holy night

This poem captures the sorrow of war in thirty-one syllables.
Innocent children, on a holy night they should have spent celebrating with their families.
My heart aches for the great sin committed by the adults.

From Mom


40. I want to have tea with you while you're hibernating
   Using the cup you said you liked

What a cute request💕
In the cold that makes you want to hibernate,
such a cute invitation will surely come true ( *´艸`)

If it were me, I'd wag my tail in joy 😝 From Mom


37.Perhaps we are being tested by this distance
   Two people looking up at Orion at the same time

Ugh, the sight of two people thinking of each other even while apart is so touching.
If you are both looking at the same Orion,
you can overcome it, it'll be okay❣

From Mom


36.Stars twinkle in the cold sky, distracting me
   Forgetting the fear of ghosts

The "fear of ghosts" part is so cute and heartwarming (*´▽`*)
The gap with the beauty of the first half is wonderful👍
It made me want to gaze at the stars in the cold sky all by myself🎵

From Mom


31."Come here for a sec! Look, isn't that star beautiful?
   It's the Pleiades, don't you think so too?"

All three poems were so fun that I couldn't help but chuckle,
but especially this thirty-one syllable poem ending with that line is wonderful ( *´艸`)
"If you say so, then that star must be the Pleiades" probably, surely🎶

From Mom


28.Determined not to lose to the north wind, into my scarf
   People hiding their faces, people turning up their collars

All three poems about doing your best while almost losing to the winter cold were cute.
Among them, I like the "determined not to lose" part of this poem ( *´艸`)
Yes, yes, let's go out without losing to the cold❣

From Mom


26.Looking up at the sky where reindeer tracks remain
   Complaining about the Santa who didn't come

A heart-tugging poem. It's wonderful❣
And that scene vividly comes to mind.
It made me want to say, it's okay to complain a little, Mom will listen ( *´艸`)

From Mom


24. Dreaming of the day when flowers bloom and fruit ripens
I will become the roots and the soil

I felt a sense of playfulness, a heart-fluttering feeling💕, and strength in these three poems, and I was deeply moved.
I am always drawn to Haru-san's poems.
Thank you for this poem, in which I feel both strength and conviction❣

From Okan


19. "It hadn't piled up until the day before yesterday"
Unbelievable, a 1m mountain

Since I grew up in snow country, I read this thinking, "I totally get it!" (*'ω'*)
It's shocking to have a 1m world the next day, isn't it?💦
My mother told me that when she was a child, they used to go in and out from the second floor!Σ(・ω・ノ)ノ!

From Okan


16. Numb feet on the small path of frost to the field
In the village without lights, even the little birds sleep

I guessed that this must be the work of someone very accustomed to both Tanka and Haiku!
KOMA-san! That makes sense❣❣( *´艸`) The part where the little birds appear is lovely🎵
Thank you for always fortune-telling before the tournament(*- -)(*_ _)bow
 👈 Not the place to say this, but🤣

From Okan


14. Christmas chicken and cake, more than that
Spending time with my wife is the best

It made me smile to think that someone feels that way( *´艸`)
When I read Nagatsuki-san's Tanka aloud,
the tempo is good and it slips right into my heart👍

From Okan


10. Winter stars to which I said sorry in my memories
A night of crunching diamonds

The other two poems were also wonderful, making me feel heart-fluttering cuteness💕 or the sadness of saying goodbye.
The impact of "A night of crunching diamonds" was so great that it stayed in my heart the most( *´艸`) It's lovely🎵

From Okan


8.I found a chimney, but it was a public bath,
Santa took a quick dip.

I laughed at Tsuru-sensei's rhythmic storytelling and the cute content.
I want Santa, who works on cold nights, to warm up nice and cozy ( *´艸`) How cute.

From Okan


6.Coming home, repeating 'it's cold' while warming up,
a blooming smile, happy for their safe return.

The gap between the first and second half is cute, isn't it? 👍
I enjoyed it as a wonderful, warm story.
Coming home safely is the thing that makes me happiest, isn't it? ( *´艸`)

From Okan


1.You, whom I waited for, never came,
the piled-up snow has turned into permanent snow.

A poem that makes you feel a pain that takes your breath away for a moment.
I like the flow where the pain of the person you waited for never coming
leads into 'turned into permanent snow' (^^♪

From Okan


Everyone

Thank you for delivering such wonderful Tanka (*- -)(*_ _)bow

If you'd like,
please come to the Spring Lilac Cup as well (*'▽')ノ🌸
I am waiting for you from the bottom of my heart❣


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