[First 3 people only] A black cat who has started to figure out the tricks of note, may I critique your paid articles (980 yen or less) that aren't selling? Or would you rather I didn't?

Let me edit your paid note!!

In this note, I will
keep trying out
whatever comes to mind!!
=> I am currently experimenting with note.

Oh,
but before that,
there is something I must tell you.

I am saying these arrogant things
without any shame, but

this note is
from a super small account on its 5th day. lol

If you are okay with that,

I will purchase your paid article and
provide a critique (or rather, point out the flaws).

I have sort of
figured out how to sell notes, so

let me
act a bit arrogant for once!!

A brief self-introduction

Last December,
I wrote my first ever paid article on a topic
that no one else was making money on in note.

That note
has sold a little more
than I initially expected, so

I am probably good at selling notes.
=> I don't think it's just a fluke.
=> I'll prove that soon too!

Basic information about that note (as of 5/5)

• Theme: Eiken Pre-2nd Grade

• Days elapsed since starting: 5 months and 2 days

• 1,118 followers

• 1 paid article (only)

• 8 free articles (only)

• Currently almost completely neglected

• Incorporated Threads starting last month

I think that's about it.
Once again, it's a pathetic account.
(The content of the paid article is good, though)

And so,

It's vulgar as always, but
I'll post a screenshot as proof for now.

How about that!

The view count and the number of likes are pathetic, right?!
Comments are zero!
Just a house cat, right??
=> Does that come across? lol

*
When I checked later, this note from day 5 of starting
had more access than
the Eiken note(of 7 days) that is now in its 6th month!lol

Behold!

My battery is low, isn't it???

See!

It's selling a little bit, right~~??
(These are the numbers from 5/1 to 5/5)

This is the current extent of it, but
if you're okay with someone like me,

I'll tell you
why your paid note isn't selling!❣

🌟Participation Requirements🌟

The target for this time is

only those who
meet all 6 of the following criteria!

1. 5 or fewer sales in the last month

2. 3 or fewer "likes"

3. It has been over a month since you started note

4. Price is 980 yen or less (for this time)

5. You seriously want to sell it

6. You won't sulk if you get critiqued

7. (New!!) Articles completely outsourced to generative AI are not allowed‼️

※
I thought #3 was unnecessary, so I deleted it the next day.

※
I added #7 early on the morning of 5/9.

Articles of this type created by people who only dabble in AI
will absolutely not sell.
Trust me.

If you think about the struggle and frustration of the process
of making AI write a note article that actually sells,
it's easier to just write it yourself, right?

Many people misunderstand this, but
actually, you're better off not using AI for writing.


I've been paying for ChatGPT
since back when it used to make mistakes in simple division,
so you should believe me when I say this.

By the way,
I also held 6 special workshops last year
to encourage generative AI debuts
for parents with middle and high school children.
▶︎ A total of nearly 60 people came!
▶︎ Is that few? Well, I limited it to 10 people per session!
▶︎ The most exciting part was making LINE stickers.

🌟 How to Participate (Conditions) 🌟

Please let me know the following 3 things
in the comments of this article!

I will purchase the specified paid article
from the "first 3 people"
and critique it in a separate article later.
⇒ It might even serve as a bit of promotion!

Since I'm paying out of my own pocket,
I'm limiting this to 980 yen or less this time! lol
⇒ Sorry for being stingy.

If I think it has value beyond the price,
I'll also give it a "like" and a "comment."

🌟 Notes 🌟

①
I will state what I feel straight, without sugarcoating.
(I won't attack your character)

Only those who won't get angry even if I do that,
please apply.
(Well, it's fine if you do get angry, though)

②
If necessary,
I will also use screenshots of the article being critiqued.

Of course,
after reading the content,
I will not take screenshots of parts
that I think should be kept hidden!

⇒ I think I will basically only take screenshots of the free parts.

⇒ And maybe the profile.

3.
If you do not meet the
conditions above,
I will have to skip you.

4.
My apologies to those who are the 4th person or later.
⇒ But I will still go and read the free parts of your articles 🐈

5.
I will provide my critique based strictly on the content
at the time I read the article.
Please understand that I cannot take into account any content updated after that.

Please forgive me as I will not be able to account for any content updated after that.

6.
I plan to release the articles I critique (or edit?) by the end of next week at the latest.

So, what do you think?

Will a brave soul appear?

If no one appears,
I'll sulk!

I think this is a pretty good opportunity, so for those who are serious about making sales on note,

Just join in on a whim!!!

It would be cowardly for me to just
sit in a safe zone
and act high and mighty while evaluating others,

If you'd like,
feel free to critique my note as well.

Hiyah!!!

It's expensive, so don't buy it!
=> I guess no one would buy it anyway, haha
=> But if you want to pass the Pre-2 level, you should buy it.

In the first place, you can usually tell if a paid note
will sell
just by looking at the free part!

I'm unusually busy
during Golden Week, so

the continuation of the article from the day before yesterday
might not be up until Friday or so.

The article from the day before yesterday👇

If you'd like,
please read that one too!!

Well then,

I am waiting for

the appearance of the "3 brave souls"!!

See you later❣

The first brave soul has appeared, so
I immediately gave them a (super) critique!

Haru-san, I'm sorry.
But I did it with love 🐈‍⬛♡

From now on,
in the new note below,

I will be "grading paid articles"!!

👇👇👇

First of all,
if you are aiming for "100,000 yen a month on note,"
come and play 🐈‍⬛🐾