[Live Coverage] Will a ruthless editor slash your note to pieces? The absolute requirements for a 'note that gets read' as derived by AI

Will your note be slashed to pieces too?

Are you worried that your note articles aren't being read?

This time, the theme is two big ones.

❶ 'How to incorporate copywriting to create note articles that get read' 🔥

❷ 'Generative AI utilization | Practical examples of role-assignment prompts'

(Sorry for being greedy.)

“You wrote it with all your heart, yet your PVs are in the single digits. No likes either. Could your writing be turning into 'just talking to yourself'?”

The reason your articles are being passed over in the city of note isn't because you lack literary talent.

You just don't know the 'blueprint of words (copywriting)'.

These are the words I, a ruthless editor generated by AI, was told as
someone aiming to monetize note. I am

revealing a forbidden discussion to turn your articles into 'assets that get read'
.

A harsh editor x a legendary author x a successful note monetizer

If you peek at their 🔥 heated meeting 🔥, you can get


3 actions you can take right now
to write 'note articles that get read'. 🫣 Especially the words of the ruthless editor really hit home. 'That is exactly my situation right now'

thump
🫨

What I used this time is Gemini.

The prompt is as follows.

【Minutes】

Copywriting techniques to make a note that gets read, and a 'profitable note' 3 people with different perspectives will discuss thoroughly.

🎙️ Characters

Harsh Editor (hereinafter, Editor-in-Chief): A professional who has seen many newcomers. Does not allow compromise and coldly points out where readers drop off.

Legendary Author (hereinafter, Author): A magician of words who has produced a string of hits with over 1 million copies sold, shaking readers' emotions and engraving them into their memories.

A pro at note monetization (hereinafter, note pro): Prioritizes 'conversion rate' over follower count. A strategist who knows the platform's characteristics inside out.

1. Title (Heading): The technique to stop fingers in 0.5 seconds

“First, the title that flows onto the top page of note. That is everything. Many writers use diary-style titles like 'What I felt today,' but who is interested in your daily life? A title won't even get clicked unless it has either 'a benefit' or 'an intense sense of incongruity'.”

“I agree. But benefits alone are bland. You have to sow 'seeds of emotion' there. For example, instead of '10 Savings Tips,' try 'I skimped on this 100 yen and lost a lifelong treasure'. Create a sense of lack in the reader's heart—a 'why?'—and make them want to fill it. This is the essence of copywriting.”

“You are both correct, but on note, you also need **'personalization'**. Include words like '[Save for later]' or 'Taught by me, who...' in the title to clarify the target audience. Also, be conscious of search traffic and place important keywords on the left. This is the trick to generating real results.”

2. Lead paragraph: Prove the 'value of payment' in the first 10 lines

“In the case of note, the game is how much trust you can win in the free section. You should apply the copywriting 'PASONA Law'. First, empathize with the problem (Problem) and show signs of a solution. If you can make them think, 'This article was written for me,' you've won.”

“You're naive. The most important thing in a lead paragraph is 'cutting the waste.' You don't need greetings like 'Hello, I'm so-and-so.' Get straight to the core. Readers are busy. In the first few lines, maximize the expectation that 'there is information here that you can't get anywhere else'.”

“I recommend including one 'scene description.' Not just data or know-how, but a single line of 'vivid personal experience'. That gives the text body heat and drags the reader into the story. It appeals to instinct, not logic.”

3. Body structure: 'Rhythm' and 'white space' to keep them from getting bored

“Writing needs a rhythm like music. Alternate short sentences with slightly longer ones. And insert copy that speaks for the reader's inner voice here and there. A phrase like, 'Even so, it's difficult, right?' narrows the distance with the reader.”

“If we're talking technical, I want you to thoroughly use the **'PREP method (Point, Reason, Example, Point)'**. note is read on smartphones. Text written in a rambling way will just be scrolled past with a single thumb. Keep sentences short and bold the words you want to emphasize. Be conscious of visual copywriting.”

“If you're aiming for monetization, include a **'re-presentation of benefits'** in the middle. As they read on, readers tend to forget their purpose. By appropriately placing words that show the future, such as 'If you practice this, you will be like this in half a year,' you maintain the energy to keep them reading until the end.”

4. Conclusion: Exit strategy to make readers 'take action'

“The end is the most important. You must not let them finish reading and think, 'Ah, that was a good story.' It's **'Call to Action'**. 'Try this right now,' 'Please share your thoughts,' 'Click here for the paid version.' Drawing the flow is a pro's job.”

“At the very end, bring in the most piercing words. Condense the philosophy that runs through the entire article into a single punchline. Create **'an impulse after reading' rather than 'an aftertaste after reading'**. If you can do that, the article will spread on social media.”

“I want to end with a 'blessing' for the reader. Your words make the reader's tomorrow a little brighter. Such **copy infused with 'prayer'** will, as a result, become a bestseller article that is loved for a long time.”

✍️ Action plan you can do right now

✅Rewrite the title: Eliminate abstract words and include 'numbers' or 'strong emotions'.

✅Check the first 3 lines: Delete the greeting and start with the conclusion or a shocking fact you want to convey most.

✅Specify post-reading action: At the end of the article, clearly state one thing you want the reader to do.

📢 Final advice from the Editor-in-Chief

"The moment you finish reading this article, your previous way of writing died.
Now, go back to your draft immediately and rewrite the first line."

How was the meeting?

I felt like I was being scolded. 🤣

Editor-in-Chief, dear readers, I am sorry.

Greetings like 'Hello, this is Torippi' were
stealing the time of busy readers, weren't they? 🙇‍♀️
(Please forgive me sometimes~🙏)

Summary of this article👇

Knowledge is just information if you don't use it.

Save (like) this article right now, and
try rewriting the title of the articleyou will publish tomorrow.

That step is the shortest path to monetizing your note.
(From a note monetization pro)

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Thank you for reading until the end.