[Izayoi Senryu] I tried writing Senryu too, so I'll join in / Chiyuda
Izayoi Cup.
I submitted my haiku early, but
among my haiku ideas, there were some that could work as senryu, so I decided to add a little senryu-like flavor and participate.
By the way, this is my first time participating in senryu, so I'm a bit worried if I've done it right, but
[Characteristics of Senryu]
・Seasonal words are optional
・Colloquial (spoken language)
・Human emotions and current events are the main subjects
・Common, humorous, and satirical expressions
・No strict rules, generally free
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So,
1st poem
Denture debut, the final blow was dried squid
This is a true story.
I was happily drinking beer with dried squid as a snack when the tooth supporting my bridge cracked with a snap,
and the end result was...
a partial denture 😭
If you want to take care of your teeth, I recommend this creator's article!
2nd poem
Across Japan, 'Like!' mugging, the photogenic moon
On the night of the harvest moon, if you just have a photo of the moon, you might be able to snatch up 'likes' as easily as you please, right?
a wonderful full moon that snatches up likes
was a wonderful full moon
"Looking at the same moon"
Has it become a Senryu worthy of the Izayoi Cup???
Third poem
My son says a subscription for a grave is fine
https://noukotsu.co.jp/subscription
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An era where you buy graves by subscription?
I imagined the difference in values between a son living in the Reiwa era and a father who lived in the Showa era.
To the management team.
Thank you for your consideration!