[#CreativeAwardReview] When Love Starts to Run. / Yoshimaru-san's "Selfish Love Gear"
Yoshimaru-san, a friend on note (if I may call them that). A fellow creator.
They are a kind person who often buys the book goods I recommend on my X account for themselves.
Hehe, I'll keep recommending them, bookmarks, book covers, books...!!
W-well, judging by this catchphrase, love should be starting between these two. Tendo-san and Okumura-san. In the first episode, it doesn't look like the gears are going to shift at all.
Tendo-san, who arrived under orders from the government. His sharp suit appearance is the very definition of an elite.
However, judging by what Tendo-san said to Okumura-san, "I have sensitive hearing, so you don't need to speak so loudly. It throws me off when people speak loudly near me, so please lower your tone," it doesn't seem like love is going to start.
This inability to read the room, the way he says things that rub people the wrong way one after another, and then the elite status...!! (Second time)
This man has something going on. That's the feeling I get at the start.
And from his bag, a sake bottle labeled "Daiberabo".
As seen in the Taiga drama, "Berabo" refers to..."a state of being unreasonable" or "something being extreme in degree."Why is he carrying this sake bottle, and where did he get it? It's a point of interest.
One of the charms of Yoshimaru-san's novels is their readability and good tempo.I also wrote a novel for the entertainment original work category last year and realized that this is difficult unless you pay attention to every detail of the writing. It's easy to be arrogant and imagine the reader's ease of reading on your own.Without consideration, writing does not become easy to read.
Yoshimaru-san's novels definitely have this delicacy.
I think this is why it's so fun to read one after another. How will these two get to know each other? Will Okumura-san capture the heart of Tendo-san, who has never had a girlfriend---!?
Continue here.
Recommended Points📘
👀 Good tempo! A sense of speed that shows they are used to writing.
👀 Not self-indulgent, a writing style that is easy to understand down to the details.
👀 The impact of the catchphrase!
I'm also always curious about how you draw these illustrations...!
Thank you for joining me again today✨
I hope the typhoon passes safely.

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