How to Write Interesting Dodoitsu with Ohayou Yone-chan Part 3

Today, I will introduce the process of creating this Dodoitsu.

The night cafe is the Coffee Galaxy,
Gathering in the light, dreams and dreams.

Nice to meet you!

Part 1 is here.

Part 2 is here.

First, set the rhythm. (7-7-7-5)

Seven-seven-seven, seven-seven-seven-seven,
Seven-seven-seven-seven, seven-seven-seven,
Seven-seven-seven, seven-seven-seven-seven,
Five-five-five-five-five

For now, insert the parts that come to mind.

Seven-seven-seven, seven-seven-seven-seven,
Why don't we do it,
And then seven-seven-seven-seven,
Becomes five-five.

With this, I feel relieved for the time being.

Think of a theme.

(e.g., Coffee Night)

Get into the rhythm, and think of the theme words.

By the starlight

I drank coffee

Lighting up the cafe

The milk I pour

Sugar for the bitterness

Just a little sugar

Sprinkled with stars

Visualize the image

By the starlight

Coffee is fragrant

Then, think about what happens next.

By the starlight

A night of gathering

Let's polish it a little more.

Coffee

In the starlight

Gathering like

If you get stuck, stop rearranging the words.
Expand your image once more.
Think about how you felt when you were there.

At the night cafe

Coffee aroma

In the starlight

Gathering dreams

How is it?

At the night cafe, coffee aroma, in the starlight, gathering dreams

How is it?

Listen to it with earphones.

Is 'gathering dreams' a bit off?

Let's list a few candidates.

Coffee scents in the night cafe,
Dreams gather in the starlight.

Coffee scents in the night cafe,
Dreams of stars gather in the light.

Lights begin to glow in the night cafe,
Asking the stars, what are your dreams?

Listen to it with earphones.

In the night cafe

and

Dreams of stars gather in the light

seem good.

Based on that, let's refine it.

Lights are being lit in the night cafe,
Dreams of stars gather in the light.

Coffee cup at the night cafe,
Dreams of stars gather in the scent.

The night cafe is a coffee galaxy,
Dreams and dreams gather in the light.

Listen with your ears using earphones.

The night cafe is a coffee galaxy
gathering dreams and dreams in the light

Decided.

All done.

The night cafe is a coffee galaxy
gathering dreams and dreams in the light

But, but, this one is also good.

Coffee scents in the night cafe, dreams gather in the starlight

Hmm, I'm struggling...

And so, the night deepens...

Thank you very much (^_^)