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Good Morning Yone-chan's Guide to Writing Fun Dodoitsu Part 1

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Good Morning Yone-chan's Guide to Writing Fun Dodoitsu Part 1


Dodoitsu?

It seems to be 7-7-7-5. There is also 5-7-7-7-5 (with a 5-character prefix(?)). To be precise,

7 3-4 (4-4)
7 4-3
7 3-4 (4-4)
5 5

is what they say. (It is said to be easy to sing.)


Good Morning Yone-chan's Style of Writing (Casual)

1. Imagine your current feelings or the situation you are thinking about.

Example,

How to write a fun Dodoitsu?? I don't know such a thing, and if it existed, I'd want to know it too!

When you think that.


2. First, try to make the content understandable at a glance.

Fun Dodoitsu (4, 4)

In this case, since there is someone listening,

Teach me the tricks (3, 4)

If 4, 3 is better,

Teach me the tricks (4, 3)

With this,

Funky Dodoitsu
Teach me the tricks


3. After that, just fudge it a bit and make it amusing.

(Association)

You can try associating 'tricks' (kotsu) with 'tapping' (kotsukotsu). If you fudge it amusingly at the end, it goes like this.

Funky Dodoitsu
Teach me the tricks
Well, tap tap tap
Cock-a-doodle-doo


(Third Party)

You can also leave it to a third party. If you leave it to the sky, it goes like this.

Funky Dodoitsu
Teach me the tricks
Ask the blue sky
And see what it says


(Love)

If you're going to make it about love, the situation is important. Probably. A sunset classroom, your profile. A notebook, an eraser, a hand you can't touch, a swaying heart, a smile, or sharing an umbrella while waiting out the rain. How about something classic?

Funky Dodoitsu
Teach me the tricks
Because you smile so innocently
My love wavers

Changing it a little,

Teach me Dodoitsu?
To your innocent self
Unable to say yes
My love wavers


(Things you like)

There is a way to draw things into your own strengths. I like space, starry skies, and spacetime, so it goes like this.

Fun Dodoitsu
teach me the tricks
in a corner
of the galaxy's swirl

Refining it.

Singing Dodoitsu
thinking of you
in a corner
of the galaxy's swirl


4. Finishing touches

For the finishing touches, try reading it aloud or listening to it. Change the line breaks. Replace some words.

Can you teach me the tricks for fun Dodoitsu?
Try asking the blueness of the sky

Can you teach me Dodoitsu?
To innocent you
I couldn't say yes
love sways

A sudden Dodoitsu
Thinking of you
in a corner of the galaxy's swirl

Is it something like this? What do you think?


And so.

How to create fun Dodoitsu?? I don't know such a thing, and if it existed, I'd want to know it too!

What I thought was replaced like this. It's interesting, isn't it?

With this, you can sugarcoat it, call it culture and art, and quietly gloss over it. Maybe.


How to create Dodoitsu parts 2 and 3 are here.


How to create poetry is here


Nice to meet you.

Thank you very much.

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