[Global Business English] Don't just communicate, get them to act. Techniques to make others take immediate action through English emails

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In the field of global business, a massive amount of English emails fly back and forth every day.

Coordinating meetings.
Checking project progress.
Handling issues.
Proposals and negotiations.

Amidst all this, there is something many Japanese people think about first when writing English emails.

"Is this English correct?"

"Should I use more natural expressions?"

"Am I being rude?"

Of course, those things are important too.

However, those who are highly valued in global settings are actually thinking about something else.

What they prioritize most is,

"Whether the recipient can take the next action immediately."

That is it.

The true purpose of an English email is not to write beautiful English.

It is to move work forward.

In other words, what separates those who are valued is not English proficiency, but 'design ability to elicit action'.

Why work doesn't progress even if the English is correct

In global work, the other party is also busy.

They receive dozens, or in some cases, hundreds of emails a day.

Therefore, the moment they read an email, they unconsciously think this.

So, what do you want me to do?

If the answer to this question is not clear, that email will be put on the back burner.

It doesn't matter how grammatically correct it is.

It doesn't matter how sophisticated the expressions are.

If the recipient cannot determine their next action, the value of the email is halved.

In fact, the emails of people who are trusted globally are surprisingly simple.

However, they all have one thing in common.

That is,

they eliminate the recipient's hesitation.

that is what they do.

People who are valued globally reduce the 'cost of decision-making'

People slow down when they have to make a decision.

This is true all over the world.

For example, suppose you receive an email like this:

Considering the current situation, it might be better to reconsider the schedule. I would appreciate your feedback.

At first glance, there is no problem.

But the recipient thinks:

What do you want me to do in the end?

What should I reply with?

By when?

This is how replies get pushed to the back of the queue.

On the other hand, high performers write it like this.

"Please confirm if you are available for the revised schedule."

"Reply by Friday."

"We will finalize the plan next Monday."

That is all.

Yet, the recipient is not left wondering.

This is because what needs to be done is clear.

Those who achieve results globally reduce the time they make others spend thinking.

In other words, they lower the cost of decision-making.

The basics of English emails are "Conclusion → Action → Deadline"

Many Japanese people start with an explanation of the situation when writing emails.

They try to convey the background carefully.

They try to explain the reasons.

And finally, they write the conclusion.

This is natural in Japanese.

However, in a global environment, it is the opposite.

What is needed first is the conclusion.

This is because the recipient wants to know the big picture first.

The recommended order is very simple.

1. Conclusion

2. Request

3. Deadline

4. Background

5. Next steps

For example,

"We need to move the launch date."

"Please confirm your team's availability by Friday."

"The supplier delivery has been delayed."

"We will update the final schedule next week."

This is all you need.

Short.

Easy to understand.

And easy to act on.

This is the kind of email required in a global environment.

"Predictive ability" is more important than English proficiency

People who can work globally have something in common.

That is, they anticipate the other person's questions in advance.

What would the other person want to know?

Where might they get confused?

What kind of anxieties might they have?

I write my emails while anticipating this.

For example, if it's a meeting invitation email,

・What is the purpose?

・Who are the participants?

・How many minutes will it take?

・Is preparation necessary?

・What will be decided after the meeting?

I write these things down first.

Then the other person feels at ease.

When they feel at ease, they take action.

And the work moves forward.

In other words, the essence of email is not just conveying information.

It is about helping the other person make decisions.

People who are trusted globally write from the 'other person's perspective'.

It is not necessarily the case that people who are good at English are evaluated highly.

In reality,

'This person's emails are easy to understand'

'Working with this person makes things move forward'

People who are thought of in this way are the ones who are valued.

Those people always keep the other person's perspective in mind.

Instead of writing what they want to say,

they organize it in a way that makes it easy for the other person to act.

That is why they get quick replies.

Decision-making is fast.

Projects move forward.

As a result, trust is built up.

Summary

In global business, English email is not a competition of English composition.

It is a practical tool for moving work forward.

What is important is,

not writing English well,

but creating a state where the other person can act without hesitation.

State the conclusion first.

Clarify the request.

Indicate the deadline.

Show the next action.

Just by being able to design this, the response speed of your emails will change significantly.

And ultimately, the person who is valued is not the one who is fluent in English.

It is the person who can get things done.

When writing an English email, try thinking about this before worrying about grammar.

"Will the person receiving this email know exactly what to do next in an instant?"

That perspective is exactly what people who achieve results in a global environment have in common.