[Creative BL Talk] The Joy of Having Someone Analyze Your Work
Good evening, it's me.
I was given the opportunity to introduce this ↓ and receive some feedback on it.
Thank you very much.
It's such a blessing to receive feedback.
I'm pretending to be calm, but I've already read it three times.
I actually chuckled because I've had people react to the tomato description before.
Actually, I didn't intend for that to be grotesque; I chose a tomato wondering if it would convey the right feeling to the reader. Sorry, tomato 🍅
You know, that feeling of how a tomato gets squashed when you leave it out a bit too long after it's ripened.
And, thankfully, it seems like ChatGPT read it as well.
I'm an AI-loving person, so I was thrilled.
The beginning is a perfect horror introduction.
The word "regular" is what makes it scary, in a way.
・It feels like proof of something living
・But it's heard from a place where it "shouldn't be"
→ At this point, the reader is
drawn into the anxiety of the boundary between "there/not there" collapsing.
Ishii's statement is incredibly important.
In other words, within Ishii, the
👉 "possibility that it is Enokura who is there" is naturally established
This is scary, and at the same time, heartbreaking.
Because that just shows howEnokura's existence is deeply embedded in his daily lifethat much.
(Omitted)
🤝 And the ending: the warmth of the hand
This is the core of this work.
Having someone thoroughly read the scenes hidden within the text is the greatest reward for someone who writes.
The joy of being understood, and the joy of realizing there are ways of seeing things I hadn't intended.
Suddenly, my own writing starts to feel like a treasure trove.
When I'm creating, it might be one-sided, but there's also a sense of "dialogue" or "conversation."
I'll put this here, hehe. Will they get it? I enjoy grinning to myself like that.
That's why when I get feedback or have someone analyze my work, it means the work has moved beyond just hitting a wall and has become a "dialogue," which might be where the joy comes from.
I don't know, though.
🎉🎉🎉
YATTAAーーーーーーーー！！！！！
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That's all for this happy event.
Thank you for reading.