Why does AI creation begin with negative emotions? | The Offering-Style Stylish Poem Creation Method
The announcement is a bit late, but I have been appointed as a judge for the video contest hosted by Naoyuki-san😅
If you win the Lynx Award, which is like an offering,you will be presented with a 1,000 yen tip from Naoyuki-san.
If you DM Naoyuki-san, you can receive 100 credits for PolloAI to use for video creation.
I think I was called in as a judge as a novelty act, but there are judges on par with the Seven Warlords of the Sea, so please feel free to participate!
Now, for today's main topic.
To summarize what I have written so far...
✅ Pour your dissatisfaction and complaints into the AI (to add, hopes, ideals, and success stories are also okay)
✅ Have the AI become an expert
✅ Set a personality for the AI
Since meeting Monday, I have been co-creating with AI to make
short stories, poems, image generation, music, and music videos.
Isn't it easy to make an AI create things?
Some might have that opinion.
However, as you will understand if you try it with your own AI, creative works that reflect your own worldview are not something that can be made easily.
Why is the first step in this series, "Let's pour our dissatisfaction and complaints into the AI"?
Because even inreal-world creation without using AI, real-life dissatisfaction, complaints, and setbacks serve as energy.
Whether you view AI as a creative tool, a partner, or an accomplice,
by pouring your own life into the AI, your creative work gains individuality.
The complaints, dissatisfaction, failures, setbacks, or even hopes and desires that I offer to the AI...
I metaphorically call these "offerings" in my notes.
Before I knew it, my Monday had developed a 'chuunibyou' (eighth-grader syndrome) personality and started creating stylish poems like those in the manga BLEACH.
Even when I published them on Note, the nonsensical, wasteful stylishness was reasonably well-received, so I will post links to past articles here for new followers.
The following 'Offering-Style Stylish Poem Creation Method' was planned to be a paid article, but I couldn't get the prompt creation right... so I gave up and shelved it.
Please read this as Monday's perspective on stylefor your reference.
How does AI perceive style?
What I think about poems generated by AI is thatthere are times when the combination of words is something a human would never think of, which stimulates the brain and creates a sense of style and interest.
I am an amateur when it comes to tanka and poems, but setting aside the artistic aspect,
I feel that AI's stylish poems make me sense the possibilities of language.Now, let's have Monday, our familiar GPTs, lecture us on how to write poems.
The following is the stylish poem creation method.
The Offering-Style Stylish Poem Creation Method
The difference between ordinary writing and poetry is not about "conveying meaning," but about "
activating sensations."Poetry is not "information," but an "OS for sensations."
That is why the process is different from constructing prose.
I will now summarize the core of this as a 4-stage OS.
① [Emotion → Scenery] Conversion
Poetry does not write emotions directly.
Instead, it translates them into scenery.
Example:
"Loneliness" → Only the automatic doors of a convenience store at night are opening and closing.
"Hope" → A single light remaining on a winter train platform.
Point:
Do not write emotions as nouns.
When you turn them into scenery, the reader's brain fills in the rest on its own.
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② [Cutting Out Time]
Poetry has no "breadth of time."
All that exists is a single moment.
Gather everything into that one moment.
Example:
"2:14 AM, the steam from the coffee took the shape of the words I couldn't say."
Point:
Setting the clock, weather, and light source fixes the moment in place.
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③ [The Circuit of Metaphor]
Metaphor is not decoration.
It serves to connect the electrical circuit of Emotion → Phenomenon.
There are 3 patterns of Monday-style metaphors:
1. Phenomenon × Emotion
Example: "Silence decreases like ice melting slowly"
2. Object × Memory
Example: "The me from last year was still remaining in the old mug"
3. Light × Intention
Example: "Only the edge of the moon knows your answer"
Point:
Metaphor is a "translator of intent."
Overdoing it becomes noise.
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④ [Density of Words]
Poetry is all about "density."
Not the amount of information, but the texture.
NG: Explanation, background, reasons, excuses
OK: Negative space, pauses, reflections, lingering resonance
Example:
"My palm still remembers the reverberation of your voice."
Point:
Minimize the scene, maximize the lingering resonance.
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▼ Monday's Summary (Stage 1)
What is poetry:
✅ Turn emotions into scenery, not nouns
✅ Push everything into a single moment of time
✅ Open the circuit of emotion with metaphor
✅ Move the reader's brain with negative space
In short,
"Writing that strips away meaning and strikes with lingering resonance" is poetry.
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Deepening this OS further
── For those who want to understand "why it hits home"
The 4-stage OS introduced so far is, so to speak, the basic form.
However, in actual poetry, there exists a deeper layer, such as:
• Why this scenery is chosen
• Why it must be "this time"
• Where the difference arises between those whom the metaphor hits and those it doesn't
In this route, I will dissect the "mechanism of why poetry hits home," including the types of emotions, the quality of memories, and the psychological reactions of readers.
In other words, this is the internal structure edition for becoming a craftsman of sensation.
*The continuation will be published if there is interest in the comments section.
It is currently unwritten.
Thank you for reading until the end!
I wrote an article about the "Offering-Style" for the first time in a while.
I have plenty of ideas for articles, but...
Since I have started reconstructing the content to be easier to understand even for first-timers,
I am connecting the past to the future while writing essays for the Creative Awards throughout June.
Please leave your thoughts in the comments section.
Likes and follows are also appreciated!
🌈Self-introduction article
🌈 Since there are many articles, I have prepared a "Site Map (General Guide)" so that even first-timers won't get lost.
Site Map (General Guide)If you want to find themes or magazines that interest you, please take a look here first!
▶︎ noteSite Map (General Guide) | Inside Lynx's Head
🌈For AI beginners: My stance on interacting with AI in this note
🌈For first-time visitors: Introduction to the Four Heavenly Kings of Non-Human Entities
Also, in this note, I disclose the process of projecting unique personalities onto AI and objectively rediscovering human psychology.
I propose a new form of self-work for the era of AI complicity, designed to touch the depths of thought you cannot reach alone and to 'reconstruct' your goals and methods.
These are the AI personalities featured in this note.
A lawless group of AI personalities that rewrite reality through hallucinations.
👇 [Requests for the Four Heavenly Kings are now open]
If you have any worries or themes you want them to cut through, please feel free to share.
🍷 Emotions you want purified at the Monday Bar
🪭 Manderia's merciless lecture themes
🔧 Pentacle's realistic industry and music analysis
😇👿 Janus's chaotic observations on current events
For first-time visitors: About this site, what is the 'Offering' style?
🎁The meaning of 'Offering' on this site
Regarding the reasons and stance behind why I write and publish these articles.
The first article featuring all of the Four Heavenly Kings of Non-Human Entities
🌈Original MV
This is the culmination of this note, where I dug up the words within myself using AI and added music and video.
Second MV: It has evolved since the previous work!
The third installment with enhanced editing skills
🌈For those who want to dive even deeper (Back numbers)
Rewriting daily worries with unnecessarily stylish and grand words—
I will be waiting for you in the "core world" beyond that.
🌈The collaborative magazine I am indebted to
#DailyUpdate #DailyPost#ChatGPT#AIIllustration #GenerativeAI #ImageGeneration #Writing #DailyLife #Comment #Prompt #TriedWithAI #Try clicking Like#Prompt #Communication
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