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[Part 1] Announcing the final results of the "#LastLineNovelAward".

We received a total of 300 entries for the "Last Line Novel Award" held from March 11 to March 24, 2024. Thank you very much. Yesterday, at the "Last Line Novel Award Judging Committee" held at a Japanese-style restaurant in Sapporo, Hokkaido,

・Grand Prize (1 winner)
・Excellence Award (3 winners)

have been decided, so I would like to announce them here along with the works that passed the first round of selection.

Once again, thank you very much to everyone who submitted so many works and helped make this contest a success.


- About the Last Line Novel Award

<Rules>
Just send the last line of a fictional novel titled "Last Will and Testament," something that sounds like a single sentence. There is no character limit. Any format is acceptable as long as it fits the general concept of a "last line" or "single sentence."

<Beginning of the Last Will>
Please send a sentence that sounds like the last line of a fictional novel that begins with the following opening.

<Selection Method>
・All entries were checked by the judging committee for the first round of selection
・The final selection was conducted from the 33 works that passed the first round
・Selection was conducted without confirming the names of the applicants
・The judging session was recorded (link at the bottom)
*The judging session was held by two people due to the committee members' work schedules

<Selection Criteria>
・Does it make you want to read it in the first place?
・Does it feel like a last line?
・Is it an original expression?

<Judges>
・Daki Ito (Chair of the Judging Committee)
・Real friend from a newspaper company (lives in Sapporo)
・Real friend from a publishing company (lives in Sapporo)
・Real friend from an advertising agency (lives in Sapporo)



Winning Works

*(In parentheses) is the creator name
*Creator names are listed without honorifics
*Creator names are as entered


Grand Prize

The cicada shell is still clinging to that tree.
(Hama-Cola! )

Selection Review: Last Line Novel Award Selection Committee
While you can feel the passage of time, it depicts a clean scene as if the camera is zooming in on the cicada shell. While many applicants sent works based on the opening "cherry blossoms," this was the only work that used the "cicada shell" as its subject. During the judging session, there were voices saying, "Isn't it too far from the subject?" but considering the excellent expression of it "clinging" and the possibility that "that tree" refers to a cherry tree, we selected this work as the Grand Prize winner.



Excellence Award

That manhole is still there.
(Yasu )

Selection Review: The Last Line Novel Award Selection Committee
A work where the word choice of "manhole" leaves a lasting impression. While you don't feel the passage of seasons or time, the role the "manhole" played in the story is subtly hinted at. During the judging panel, we even discussed "what the manhole represents" and "specifically where the manhole is located," but we selected it for the Excellence Award, swayed by its exquisite distance from the main theme and the simplicity and power of the writing.



Excellence Award

I tried rubbing the paper, but it didn't smell like anything.
(Yukipoko )

Selection Review: The Last Line Novel Award Selection Committee
A work that one of the judges on the panel pushed, saying, "If I had to choose from all the entries, this is the clear winner." After trying to rub the paper (= a will? cherry blossoms?), naturally, there was no scent, and it is a gentle final line that simply states that impression. While many entries aimed for grand conclusions, voices were raised that the exquisite sense of detachment and laid-back feel of this sentence were worthy of the Grand Prize. Selected as an excellent work that brings to mind a slightly dazed figure.



Excellence Award

I dug up her buried remains, slowly gave water to the shriveled thing, and sometimes the three of us have tea parties.
(Yasu )

Selection Review: The Last Line Novel Award Selection Committee
Although it has a catchy rhythm and is a sentence whose meaning is not immediately clear at first glance, the opinion of one of the judges, Mr. Kikuchi, hit the nail on the head during the panel. The speculation was: isn't what is being dug up "memory"? Although it feels a bit long for a final line, we selected it for the Excellence Award, comprehensively taking into account the rhythm of the sentence, the metaphorical expression "shriveled," and the aftertaste.


Works that passed the first round of selection (30 works)

*In no particular order
* Bold text indicates the 9 works selected for the final round
*(In parentheses) is the creator's name
*Creator names are listed without honorifics


- The women's lives have not yet begun. (Miyamon) - The three tiny red bound-foot shoes were buried in fallen leaves, faded, with only the gold of the embroidery remaining vivid. (

Kanako) - These cherry blossoms will fall anyway. (

Shionaga
Minamo) - The cherry blossoms are in full bloom again. (Kaya) - Because there is no such thing as a cherry blossom that does not fall. (u1



) - In the end, I had been living all along just to make sure I wouldn't die tomorrow. (Ookawa

⭐️
- I wrote this much, then tore it up and threw it away. (Hayabusa

) - That cherry tree, which knows everything, continues to scatter its pale pink petals again this year. (Leon Saruogi) - Only the white snow falling silently remembers the women. (Leon Saruogi

) - Even so, the flowers bloom, and then they scatter. (Leon Saruogi

) - When I looked up at the sky, green leaves were shimmering against the clear blue. (Leon Saruogi

- The cherry blossoms are in full bloom again this year.
(Sayako

) - He gasped for a moment, and as if to affirm that surprise, a steam whistle blew in the distance. (Meigetsu Mikasa

) - One thing I can say is that the will is no longer needed. (Meigetsu Mikasa) - "So, what did it say in the end?" (Mogura

)



No one knows that I continue to wear my sister's underwear. (Arkun)

・A carpet of cherry blossoms danced in the farewell. (Tamachan)

・The words unraveled into the void, and no one could touch them. (Ichifuji)

・The torn-up will was shaped like cherry blossom petals. (Ichifuji)

・No one knows that she rewrote it. (GongC Walter)

・I have no intention of talking any further about why I came to hate cherry blossoms. (Konishi Kinoko)

・I just wanted to apologize for choosing the method of a novel to explain that. (Konishi Kinoko)

・In short, I wanted someone's love. (Konishi Kinoko)

・The life that was, and the life that should have been, lie together with the scattered cherry blossoms. (Nayuta)

・The withered street trees in the evening are waiting for spring again, trying to begin someone's life. (Nayuta)

・I wouldn't call French bread a baguette even if it killed me. (Nayuta)

Not a single person noticed that a dirty dog ran through this town with a white envelope in its mouth. (Botan)

・I changed the channel before the news announcer could read the first name. (Full-time Employee Pumpkin @ Person who drinks sake without looking)

・Hey. Is heaven a non-smoking area? (Sakura Daimon-no-jo)

・The insomnia-ridden moon is glaring at me again today. (Sakura Daimon-no-jo)

Selection Review: Last Line Novel Award Selection Committee
We received various "last line" works for the titles "Will," "Pure White Cherry Blossoms," and the theme "Three Women." Honestly, they were all excellent works and it was hard to choose between them; it wouldn't be strange if any of them became the grand prize winner depending on the timing of reading or if viewed a day later. As a selection committee, the opinion that "they all have excellent sense and we couldn't write them ourselves" occupied the majority. I would like to express my heartfelt respect and gratitude.


Jury Special Award

What did you say!!? We are the "Three Misses Gathered, Wisdom of Monju 2025"!!? (Pokupuu)

Selection Review: Last Line Novel Award Selection Committee
Out of all the submitted works, this was the most incomprehensible. However, the selection committee was stunned by its momentum and mysterious word choice, so we decided to select it as a special award on the spur of the moment. I feel that normally one should refrain from publishing a work that didn't even pass the first round of selection, but I dare to publish it here.



General Review from the Selection Committee

I would like to state first that I am sorry that the members of the selection committee, who are not professionals or anything, ended up on the side of judging the submitted works. This time, the number of submitted works was exactly 300, and about 90 people applied. They were truly wonderful, solid works. The criteria for judging were not clear, and I am worried whether the results were convincing to everyone who saw them. Even so, I would like to record that each judge, including myself, spent a lot of time on the judging process. Lastly, I would like to express my heartfelt gratitude to everyone who submitted their work, everyone who sent their impressions of this project, and the three judges.


State of the Selection Meeting (Audio)

<Contents>
00:00 Opening and judging overview
02:15 Introduction of judge Kikuchi
04:48 Theme opening and Kikuchi's reading
08:33 Brief review of the 33 works that passed the first round
01:08:07 Jury Special Award
01:17:20 From here, the 9 final selection works
01:23:38 Selection judging for the Grand Prize
01:32:25 Decision of the Grand Prize
01:35:08 First time confirming the applicants' names
01:37:08 Actually, this submitted work is about talking about likes

<Afterword>
Thank you very much for the many submissions. As I talked about in the selection meeting (audio distribution), it is extremely difficult to evaluate works. In this case, it is somewhat similar to a catchphrase, so although it took time, I don't think the difficulty of evaluation was that high. I realized that the Akutagawa Prize must be seriously crazy. Thank you again for today until the end.

[Related] This is the note of the Grand Prize winner this time


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