Not love, but love songs in 7-7-7-5

I have become completely obsessed with 7-7-7-5 Dodoitsu.
Dodoitsu seems to focus on love songs, but since I haven't written any love songs before, I tried to squeeze some out.

Though you are gone now, you are the only one who always remains in my heart

When I think of you, the pomegranate flower splits, spills over, and bears fruit

Walking alone through the streets of Kobe where we once walked together, my heart tears apart

The night curtain falls on the hill where the cicadas cry, longing for you

Seeing that girl shining brightly, I dream once again of a summer day

I am participating in the Tsurukame Cup spin-off project. This is my third time!