Secret Response Poem
I am responding to the two poems selected from the previous Secret Response Poem.
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*I will update the article as comments come in. Honorifics are omitted.
*I will select one poem from this round of responses to serve as the source poem for the next (final) Secret Response Poem.
Source Poem ①
When your smile warms my heart,
Footprints shine, and the path stretches toward eternity.

Response Poem
The path I walk is in darkness, but when I look back,
The footprints of our answers stretch out long.
Kacchi
With a smile and trust as the lighthouse of my heart,
The path of destiny illuminates my feet.
Sasara Madoka
The path continues, and your back is so dear to me,
I want to follow you from two steps behind.
Shirokuma Kirin
Emerging from the dark tunnel, there is light,
Together with you, I shine as well.
Yamane Akira
Hase Kannon, when I go with you, even the sound of the falling rain
fades away into the distance
Along with spring
The smile we share, surely beyond that, the path where we drew
our footprints, and a single light
Second Season
When I look far back at the path I have traveled
there are millions of shining footprints
Temari
On this path that continues endlessly and far away
two sets of footprints continue forever
Izayoi
Laughing along with your smile, how delightful
A gathering of light, a path of dreams is formed
Tomone
The eternal path we walked together, no matter how far
Overflowing with smiles, in the midst of the light
Miyu
When I saw your face looking so relieved
I felt the path that continues on just like this
Steamed Shrimp
Living alone, the sadness of these lonely days
Gently, like the sun, did you embrace me?
moe
Our dreams and tears shining in our footprints
Eternity is near, look, if I'm with you
Good morning Yone-chan
In the twilight, the path I tread through the green fields
Through stormy nights and calm mornings alike
Non-cha
I smile so that you won't feel anxious
Let's go, like Charmy Green
Non-cha
When I look back, the signposts of a long journey
Following the footprints you left behind
Chiyo Ohashi
Laughing, crying, and having my heart skip a beat
Many footprints intersect and shine
Dried Persimmon
Seeing your shining footprints, I am drawn
To you, and I reach out my hand
Tsuru
Though I follow your footprints with a pure heart,
When you turn around, the colors might fade
Keika Nishino
Original Poem 1
If it could come true, I would wear handmade clothes
And try to feel you in reality

Response Poem
I don't mind if the clothes are ready-made
What I want to knit by hand is our life together
Katchi
Wigs, makeup, and clothes, I'll prepare them all
Let's play together in the same world
Madoka Sasara
Beloved, with a wish woven into every stitch
I feel the warmth of the lining I touch
Shirokumakirin
Don't let your delusions run too wild, aren't you being foolish?
Look, if you turn around, the boss is watching.
Akira Yamane
I can feel it, wearing handmade clothes.
I write it as 'love,' but read it as 'you.'
Ninoshun
Really! If I wear handmade clothes,
will you understand my reality?
Haru-to-tomoni
Vertical threads and horizontal threads intertwining,
I want to be the fabric that wraps around you.
Izayoi
If I make a nice piece of clothing, I want to show it to you.
Secretly tell me if it suits me.
Tomone
A love made only of ready-made clothes is boring.
Let me take your measurements tonight.
Temari
Taking shelter from the rain, if I'm with you and not going home today,
I'll undo the buttons of my handmade clothes.
Miyu
Leave it to me, haute couture, just wait
As I make it, I feel you too
Steamed Shrimp
Two knitting needles overlap and form
The pattern you like begins to emerge
Yunagi Haruka
I feel you in my dreams, and as I gaze at you
A sense overflows that exists nowhere else
moe
"I met you," as I gaze at you, smiles overflow
Feeling the one-of-a-kind against my skin
moe
If it could come true, the humming you made
I'd hum it as I head home, and you'd be by my side
Ohayou Yone-chan
With every stitch I knit, your face comes to mind
Wondering if it will look good on you
Noncha
Make it for me, make it, make me some clothes
The voices of dolls lined up in silence
Chiyo Ohashi
On the handmade apron with initials,
I secretly entrust the dinner.
Dried persimmon
If it is a heart that is handmade and real,
Will it connect? The garment called love.
Vine
If it is a love that is handmade and nestled close,
I will spin your feelings.
Keika Nishino
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