Even short sentences can convey deep feelings, right? 😳

Hello, this is Satomii

To begin with

My article was featured in a magazine 😊

Annosuke-san ✨✨

Thank you so much, as always 🙇

I am grateful ✨✨

--- ------------------- ---

By the way

Do you know what "Dodoitsu" is?

It is read as "Dodoitsu"

At first glance, I wondered what it was in kanji, but when I saw it in hiragana, I thought, "I've heard of that before" 😄

But I don't know the meaning 💦

What is Dodoitsu?

That is what it says 😊

The reason I found out about it is

Kei-san's

It was something called "Dodoitsu and Pictures"✨✨

Kei-san's worldview is incredible😳

I have written an article about salaryman senryu before, but↓

Thinking about it now...

Both express things so well within a fixed number of characters~

I am surprised all over again💦

Moreover

5-7-5feels easier than7-7-7-5in terms of rhythm, but I've seen a few ofKei-san'sarticles and...

The scenes were conveyed so vividly through those Dodoitsu and pictures✨✨

Sometimes, when I watch someone's stream on YouTube or elsewhere

"Um"

"How should I put it..."

When I see them repeating these and the conversation doesn't really move forward

Hurry up

There are times when I get so frustrated 😅

I get excited and click on thumbnails, but they either drag things out way too much or...

“Actually, well, you see...”

“Um, let me see...”

They say things like that, then go off on a tangent, and then come back to the original topic... 😩

Huh?

Are they doing it on purpose?

Hey, wait a minute!

If they were talking to someone, that would be one thing, but as the thumbnail suggests, the content is already decided, so please let me listen at a better pace 😭

So, what was the point in the end?

It's like that 💦

Well, I do get tricked by clickbait quite often...

But

Even with words or writing, if the story isn't organized, it jumps all over the place, and there are times when you end up not knowing what they wanted to say, right? 😅

I want to convey it, but it doesn't get across

When you think about it that way,

conveying something within a set rhythm and character count is also quite difficult 💦

But for those who can convey them,

they really do get through, don't they? ✨✨

Well then, I'll try a bit more ♪

A chilly

gazing to the left

the rain hitting the window

is it autumn?

　　　　　　
　By: Satsumimi

Man, I tried writing a Dodoitsu about how I felt this morning 😆

Even though it's completely autumn, it's still so hot that I haven't really felt it, but this morning it was quite chilly and I felt autumn 💦

I'm no match for you, Kei-san, but

trying to think and express myself within such fixed structures is quite a good learning experience!

The Dodoitsu by Kei-san that I introduced first

has no complicated words,

I'm sure they must have parted ways~

I could even imagine the scene like that 😰

For example, if the last phrase was

“Running alone today”

then perhaps they overslept and were in such a rush that they didn't even have the time to look at the autumn leaves they usually see while walking 💦

The impression changes in that way

Ah, well... that's just my guess

Am I wrong? 😅

※Sorry for changing it on my own 🙇

The second Dodoitsu seems to express

kei-san's own feelings using“dried fallen leaves”as a metaphor

Without explaining things in minute detail, the person's feelings at that moment come across, making you laugh, touching your heart, or sparking your imagination

My, how profound it is✨✨

When I look back on it suddenly

This note has become a catalyst for me to learn things I didn't know before 😄

My knowledge has increased by one more

I've even tried creating my own Dodoitsu, naturally learning through thought

That's why, after all

I can't stop using note! 😁

kei-san ✨✨

Thank you for the lesson 🙇

The end

Summary for today

"Note is truly a treasure trove of learning" is it

When I hear the word Dodoitsu

For some reason, geisha come to mind, but...?

Is there any connection?

Is it just my imagination...? 🤔

The Salaryman Senryu made me laugh, but I would like to try my hand at Dodoitsu again with this kind of emotional feel!!

My articles can be quite long too

I feel like my repertoire for conveying things in short sentences is going to grow! ✨✨

Well... I wonder about that 💦

I relate to this! It happened to me too! If you found this interesting,
please give it a like ♡ and follow me 🙇
I am really looking forward to your comments 😄