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Unofficial Maho Award Haiku + New Year's Lucky Bag Winter 2023

It is February now, isn't it.
The Unofficial Maho Award Haiku Winter 2023 is finally here!
I made it in time before the official award announcement.

11 haiku plus a lucky bag! 🎉

I chose them from this list.
The Nature and Children's sections, as well as haiku by children, were also selected.

Congratulations!

Thank you all so much!!!

chiyo-san

334. The sound of crunching snow and sleet where musical notes can be seen

I love the 'crunching' sound ♫ I can see the musical notes.

Thank you.

Daina-san

329. Bundled up in layers, me and a sparrow on the morning path

The scene of a cold winter morning really comes across.
I thought the contrast between me bundled up in layers and the small sparrow was lovely.

Thank you.

By the way, Daina-san, I compose haiku when I go for walks. Also when I'm falling asleep. If I don't make a note saying 'Ah, I did it. Must memorize this,' I wake up in the morning and have absolutely no idea what it was.

Niku to Kirimi no Chiisana Teikoku (5th-grade boy)-san

271. I have to go to sleep now, bath is tomorrow, winter moon

The rhythm is wonderful, and I also liked that it ends with the seasonal word 'winter moon'.
It feels like the gentle winter moon is watching over you.

Even though it was time to go to sleep, you composed a haiku for me. Thank you, Niku to Kirimi no Chiisana Teikoku-kun.

I was so happy you participated in the Children's section.
Thank you, Ricotto-san.

S.PPP-san

252. Skunk cabbage, come out soon, you cute sprout

It is lovely how you are speaking to and calling out to the skunk cabbage. I also felt like I want to meet those cute sprouts soon.

Thank you to everyone in the class and for participating in the Children's Department!
Thank you, Minomushi-sensei.

Madoka Sasara-san

212. Fighting tops spun from hands like whitebait

Just the 'hands like whitebait' in the upper phrase stirs my imagination about what kind of woman she is. And then, fighting tops. The demeanor of the woman I first imagined has been completely overturned!

211. First sunrise, deciding that the fortune will come true

I thought this haiku was also very like Madoka-san.

Thank you, Madoka-san.

Ayuta-san

191. Sasanqua, mother in the photo is always at the edge

Ayuta-san, your haiku are always excellent as expected. (I've started to recognize your haiku style)
Your grandfather and grandmother were wonderful, and your mother is too.
The scene and the emotions really come through.
Thank you.

Keika Nishino-san

172. Holding small hands up to the sky, a persimmon left for the birds

It is gentle and lovely to put small hands together with the kigo of a persimmon left for the birds.
I will feel a sense of gentleness every time I look up from now on.
Thank you.


Seven Sword-kun
171. Godzilla-level power of anger, winter thunder

With 'Godzilla-level,' the power of the anger and the intensity of the winter thunder are conveyed very well.
The combination of Godzilla and winter thunder is brilliant!

Everyone in the Children's Department is amazing!!

Noriko Tonomura-san, thank you for launching and running the Children's Department♪

Ishikoro-san

167. Everyone is a silent penguin in the winter city

Silent penguins, that's nice. And 'everyone.' I imagined a line of penguins looking down or just looking straight ahead from the station. It's spot on, isn't it? Many people wearing black coats or white coats walking silently, erasing their individuality.
During the recent big cold wave, the weather forecast said, 'For those in regions not used to snow, please walk like a penguin.'

Thank you, Ishikoro-san.

Koredemo-kaasan
162. Gazing at the belly of an airplane at the start of the year

I love gazing at the sky. Gazing at the belly of an airplane is so grand. The start of the year, watching an airplane fly toward its destination. What kind of year will begin? I feel a vast future.

Thank you.

Izayoi-san

114. Deeply, deeply, snow, snow, only six-petaled flowers

I love the 'only.' I hope everyone feels it in their own way.

Thank you, Izayoi-san.

New Year's Lucky Bag

Everyone, do you buy lucky bags? Do you like them?

trafalgar-san

257. Life is a lucky bag with unknown contents

That might be true. Life might have things you think you don't need, but it's full of luck. You don't know what will come out until you take it out of the lucky bag. I wonder if that is life.

258. Unexpectedly delightful book lucky bag

When you choose books yourself, they tend to be biased. I've started hearing about vending machines where book titles are hidden.
I learned about libraries that lend out book lucky bags through trafalgar-san's haiku and articles.

Thank you.

Polar Bear Cup, all crew members
All judges
All participants

Thank you.

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