Requested Song - Promise - Icchomae.

The other day
to my surprise,
I received a comment in the comment section of "Eh-⑤"
from Icchomae.

This is a copy-paste:
goku-san, I enjoyed reading your Rakugo series this time as well. I apologize for always making comments that don't read the room, but I am commenting because I was hoping you might set my poem to music, goku-san. I am truly sorry for making such a brazen request.
(｡-人-｡)
I would appreciate it if you could do so when your busy schedule allows. m(._.)m
(It's out of season, but)
The poem is below.

Huh?
They say they don't even post their own work.!! Even though it's on note?
Even though it's a "poem"???

It's okay, I love "dynamic"!!!

It's okay, I love "hooks"!!!

It was a bit on the "upper" side, though.

It's okay, I love "straight punches"!!!

Let's dare to make a connection.
"What's wrong with posting in the comment section?"
#WhatAreYouTalkingAbout
is what I say.
"Icchomae." has their own
policy! Surely...

Besides, they asked me, a clumsy person...
I accepted it gratefully!!!

Here are the 3 songs. How about this, Icchomae.?

I'm making them gradually more metal.(This time, I added subtitles...)

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②

③

Original Poem

The town is filled with sweet scents and White & Red STVs lined up
Looking around, everyone is overflowing with happiness
But you were standing there all alone
I can't help but look away
When I realized it, you were standing in front of me and whispered to me, "I've been waiting."
I said I was sorry for keeping you waiting
I remembered the promise we made in our previous life
You've been waiting for me here all this time, haven't you...
Many years have passed since then. We walk at the same pace and you give me your smile
The sweet scent of STV and your smile together
I don't have much time left, but
Will you stand there again in the next life?

Revision

The town is filled with sweet scents and chocolates lined up in White & Red
Looking around, everyone is overflowing with smiles
But
You, standing all alone
I can't help but look away
I stood right in front of you
You
Whisper to me, "I've been waiting."
I replied, "Sorry for keeping you waiting"
I remembered the promise we made in our previous life
That we would meet "there" next time
You
Have been waiting for me all this time, haven't you
Many days have passed since then
You give me your smile at the same pace
The sweet scent of chocolate wrapped in your smile
Soon, my new life will begin
Can we make a promise again?

For SunoAI
[intro]
[verse 1]
The town is filled with sweet scents and chocolates lined up in White & Red
Looking around, everyone is overflowing with "smiles"

[chorus]
But
"You" standing all "alone"
I can't help but not look away with my "eyes"
I stood right in front of your "eyes"
You
Whisper to me, "I've been waiting"
I replied, "Sorry for keeping you waiting"

[verse 2]
I remembered the promise
we made in our previous life
That we would meet "there" next time

[chorus]
You have been waiting for me all this time, haven't you?

[Guitar Solo]

And since then, through just a few 'days',
You give me your 'smile' at the same 'pace'.

The sweet scent of chocolate was wrapped in a 'smile'.

Soon, a 'new life' will begin for me.

[chorus]
Is it okay if we make a 'promise' again?
[outro]
[end]

Styles
emotional, male vocal, hard rock(gothic metal), 70(50)bpm, Code E(G)

That is all... ahhh, I am worried if you will like it... what do you think??

#Icchomae. #DailyNote #DIY #SunoAI #youtube #youtubechannel #NWONG